Snowdin Town

What's working: You demonstrate a good grasp of the arrangement's overall layout and character changes, particularly in how you approach the transition into the swung stride section around 0:47. The melodic intent is clear throughout, and you manage to keep the piece moving forward from start to finish without completely breaking down. What to work on next: 1. Rhythmic stability and pulse: Your tempo fluctuates significantly throughout the performance. The intro (0:07–0:24) hesitates frequently between chord changes rather than maintaining a steady pulse. Practice this section with a metronome at a slow, strict tempo to solidify your left-hand transitions. 2. Left-hand leap control (0:47–1:07): In the middle swing section, the left-hand bass-and-chord pattern causes noticeable rhythmic dragging and stumbling when moving between the bass note and the chord. Isolate the left hand alone until the leaps are accurate without compromising the time. 3. Clean execution on fast runs (1:39–1:44): The descending run near the end is rushed, uneven, and several notes are missed or clipped. Practice this passage using rhythmic patterns (dotted rhythms) and ensure every finger lands securely before bringing it back up to speed. 4. Dynamic balance: The left hand accompaniment often overpowers the right hand melody. Focus on playing the left hand lighter and softer so the top line can lead clearly.

Generated 8/3/2026